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【CG】多多指教m(_ _)m

【CG】多多指教m(_ _)m

第一次在此貼圖,小的畫技不精,還望各位多多指教!
貼上幾幅近作


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WELCOME~

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Welcome to CG-Planet, 蠍君!
Wish you enjoy your stay in here

蠍君 appears to be a CG veteran, able to finish these well-polished CG sketches within recent days.

The first pic looks wonderful.

For the 2nd one, just slightly increasing the head size will make the character's proportion more balanced.

The 3rd one as a whole is quite good (with nice colour combination). Just the sitting
pose may require some adjustment for more natural look. Here are two possible suggestion:
1) Either let the right leg to be straightened as well OR
2) Just keep the knee in a slightly bent position, but make the right calf & foot follows that bending angle, making the right foot not rest on the same level as the left feet. (i.e. the right feet should be rested on a slightly higher level when viewed from the front)

Hope these help.
BTW, do you have any online site or gallery that hosts your other artworks?

Look forwards to more artwork posting from you
a.k.a -  Anthony O^O
如果看到我用英文留言, 請使用谷歌翻譯來翻譯。
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Comic: Bait in Dress | Game Sprites: Noah More Heroes, WitchBlaster

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先謝謝你的建議
經驗尚淺,說不上老手啦
近來閒著才有時間完成幾幅作品
blog:http://gwingyob.blog125.fc2.com/

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蠍君的作品都非常生動鮮明,
雖然沒用上甚麼複雜的技巧.
但光是少女青春甜美的造型及明光的配色都很討好~~~
如果可以在比例上可以處理得更穩定,就更相得益彰了!!
希望可多看到你的新圖哩~~~
部落格就這樣子過了10週年:
Lemon-Po@Windmills

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回覆 5# 的帖子

謝謝你的評語,
對啊我對比例和骨架方面相當不熟悉呢,
大概還在摸索的階段~

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顏色很不錯呀! 特別係最後一張,用色光鮮又唔會撞色,光暗色也配搭得很好!
我覺得你是高手呀~~
基本上骨架我沒找到甚麼缺點呢,
只是我覺得第一張,有點似假髮,或者你試下用多些細線去畫頭髮,有點散開的髮根,
而不要把頭髮當成一塊固體。

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蠍君:
其實骨架及比例你大致掌握得不錯,
要說的話是不夠穩定而已~~~
有些細節上(例如:頸肩跟胸骨的比例)再刻細緻點就更理想了!
部落格就這樣子過了10週年:
Lemon-Po@Windmills

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RE 希絲卡:
先謝謝你的評語。
對於抵達【高手】的境界仍是很長的征途呢。
很認同像假髮這點!其實第二幅也很奇怪的說,就是你所說的吧。
謝謝你的意見!

RE Lemon-po:
骨架、比例方面還是很依賴圖片參考,
目標是,能光憑想像畫出來吧。
記得第三幅就跟著真人模特兒的照片畫的,結果就穿崩了。
謝謝你的意見!

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