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[原創]中秋兔

[原創]中秋兔


作畫:adobe photoshop cs
時間:大概10小時
尺寸:800*600(另有1024*768跟1280*960於個人網頁)
歡迎狠批


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吃卑鄙月餅吃到得了腸胃炎 還是不懂畫這種卑鄙的東西...
畫得跟地球一樣...是平的

星空畫得不像星空...像生疱瘡

臉上的饀...都是很平...

刀子...用崩了的刀是很多細菌的
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黃色流質的是甚麼? 蛋黃,,,不像是.... 連蓉又無甘黃....謎一般的液體呢....
歡迎光臨我們的BLOG:
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畫得不夠硬身的綠荳蓉....
好像有點稀...
唔...
月餅變壞了(炸
不要放在室溫超過三小時
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人物設計得不錯喔。
不過小的覺得背景有些亂....(而且手指也好像有點怪)
加油哇哇!!

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唔...
手指的肉體曲線糟掉了...
另外
彩色背景是我不擅長的地方...
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> 歡迎狠批
As you wish...

You did a hard work on the sleeves of the purple clothes that
the bunny girl is wearing... I wish you are able to keep such consistency
with the rest of the pic.

Take a while to figure out the bunny girl is actually eating a 卑鄙月餅...
This explains why she appeared a bit strange with the background & foreground.
You should add some shadings on the clothes when they are close to the cake.
(This 卑鄙月餅 is really big then... eating it seems to give oneself a mess...
Be careful next time on how to store 卑鄙月餅 properly... they are quite easy to
get contaminated...)

Also, your light sources are a bit confusing... it appears that you are using an indoor
lighting, but the background moonlight is a bit too bright then and the actual shadow
of the character was casted by the moonlight...
In other words, fix your light source next time. In this scenario, you should let
the moonlight, together with starlights, to be your main light source. THis also
means your character's front areas will get darker shades... like the sleeves you
did.

The skin shades for pale skins look suitable but you should have been bolder to
add more details. The bunny girl still appears a bit flat overall.

Plastic knife's shadings are a bit wrong... Get a real one to observe.
(Somehow I felt it appeared like a wooden ice cream spoon)

Overally, the concepts are interesting. If you are able to refine your
CG painting skills, the pic should look better.

Anyway, wish you recover soon. Keep going!
a.k.a -  Anthony O^O
如果看到我用英文留言, 請使用谷歌翻譯來翻譯。
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Comic: Bait in Dress | Game Sprites: Noah More Heroes, WitchBlaster

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你不說那是柄刀子, 我還以為是撐船用的船篙~  如果你說她是站在蛋糕裡的話, 那就是最失敗的部份, 因為那根本沒有蛋糕該有的質感(或是它放在冰箱裡太久了喇??) 另外字體忽大忽小的, 是故意的嗎??

別怪我太狠

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>Anthonyllt
謝謝指教
整體光源...Anthonyllt大不說我還不覺...
唉唉
我家中的刀都是全金屬製的(淚

>nikle
指導感謝
還有整體畫面的立體感問題啊...
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就說我吃了一大堆還畫不出來(炸
===
字體的問題是小女天生異稟(咦
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>>別怪我太狠
不會
我是二十四小時全天候m(挺

感謝各位大大的指導啊

[ 本帖最後由 san4 於 2007-10-2 01:55 PM 編輯 ]
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