打印

文學少女

文學少女


看完文學少女劇場版所畫的
歡迎狠批=.=
===
畫風還是丁點穩定也沒有-.-
感覺比春cw圖還要差-w-
正面姿勢異常不濟,脊骨好像不存在的姿勢TwT
好吉的構圖T田T"
~小弟的個人組織-琉璃人形館 專頁
有興趣歡迎來踩場喔

TOP

The book eater...

I think your colouring style is getting stable somehow...
Giving a stronger light and shade contrast will be nice.

The character pose may look slightly strange for the lower half.
If you try to grab a book with your knees in a sitting pose, then you will realize what I'm trying to point out (i.e. the legs and how the book should be placed).
Resolving those issues will allow you to do a much natural works over the AT field area.

Try to spend some times to make the props more believable...
- The legs of the chair should be thicker.
- The current pile of books will guarantee to fell down in the next frame. Observe how a book pile is formed, especially those causally piled up on the ground. The books will all be rotated into different horizontal orientations.
- Give a bigger window to review more scene from the outside to give some more background colour variations.

Hope this helps.
a.k.a -  Anthony O^O
如果看到我用英文留言, 請使用谷歌翻譯來翻譯。
============================================
Comic: Bait in Dress | Game Sprites: Noah More Heroes, WitchBlaster

TOP

原本的草圖是由大腿對上的(汗
所以增生下去就怪掉了...

然後打算做背光
又怕會弄得太黑...

於是就整個怪掉了=丆=
~小弟的個人組織-琉璃人形館 專頁
有興趣歡迎來踩場喔

TOP

其實san4的圖已表現出一定的技巧水平,
不單在配色上表現出漂亮的色彩觸覺,
構圖的故事性也很用心~~~
唯一比較可惜是對少女的曲線仍未掌握得很好,
加上動作上的透視表現要求不低,
以致影響了成績....希望san4能狂這方面多下苦工!!
部落格就這樣子過了10週年:
Lemon-Po@Windmills

TOP