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[リトバス]神北小毬

[リトバス]神北小毬



歡迎狠批
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遊戲推出了...
不過沒錢(灰
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作CG速度好慢
居然花了差不多一個月的時間

而且...總是覺得沒個人風格
~小弟的個人組織-琉璃人形館 專頁
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好用心刻的食物呀~
沒看到放大圖真的看不出來...感覺作者對甜食比較有熱情 XD

至於小毬, 個人是覺得雙腿如果擁有女性的線條, 穿起短裙裙才更有味道 \ ^Q^ /
歡迎光臨我們的BLOG:
http://www.starnlei.com

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刻圖很用心,而且小毬也畫得很可愛,襯色也很溫和,沒有不協調之處.
如果說有問題,最主要都是出現在肢體比例上邊.
例如伶姊說到的雙腿線條問題,還有手肘畫成u形是比較奇怪外.
個人而言會小挑一下過長的身形比例,
要是女生畫成超修長的話,男生不就要畫成竹竿才行了嗎?
好像還是只有clamp才有畫"童顏超長身"的本錢啊!

至於個人風格啊.....坦白說,偏向萌系畫風的話,是比較不容易展露個人風格的啊....
能夠在萌系畫風中能夠注入強烈個人畫風,又能廣為人所接受的畫帥始終不多,
所以這個不好太苛求,把人物骨架比例練好還比較要緊哩!!
部落格就這樣子過了10週年:
Lemon-Po@Windmills

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Apart from what the others had said, I want to point out
some of the shadings are insufficient.
Hairs look very nice but the rests of the body require
more gradients of colours & contrasts. (Like the inner surface of
the skirt should be darker, food & paper bag appear too flat due
to the lack of shadings, etc.) Shades help to build up the volumes
of the objects.

> 作CG速度好慢
> 居然花了差不多一個月的時間

  That's normal. You have to practise more to gain speed
(As you gain more Experience, you can paint a bit faster)

> 而且...總是覺得沒個人風格
As you start to beware this, I suggest you should start to
develop your own characters - it's one of the ways to
develop your style.

Keep going. Good luck.
a.k.a -  Anthony O^O
如果看到我用英文留言, 請使用谷歌翻譯來翻譯。
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Comic: Bait in Dress | Game Sprites: Noah More Heroes, WitchBlaster

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>伶子
嗯...其實甜食只愛果汁糖,甜的餅食是外道(喂
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腿的線條很難控制,看了一本教畫人像素描的書,
人的線條要有肉感,線條要有"笠突"(不懂打<汗)才像個人...
結果...(淚

>lemon-po
果然太長了...
曲肢的真的很難按比例畫...
好容易出現過長或過短的問題...
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題外話,現在在學<魁!!男塾>式的男人畫法...
1:8-9...唉唉
不過合萌繪的感覺好像超~詭異的

>Anthonyllt
層次感不足...嗯...(筆記
畫這幅時怕用色太深,跟色調會不搭調
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原創人物...唔...我的顏色配合挺詭異的...所以都沒畫彩圖
下次試試看
不過好像也要cw稿完後才有空

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謝謝各位大大賜教!!<(_ /\ _)>
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~小弟的個人組織-琉璃人形館 專頁
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個人風格?
當你畫別的同人的時候,無論如何都畫的不像的時候,這種感覺就是你的個人風格了

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>alice456

即是畫不像原本的作品?
~小弟的個人組織-琉璃人形館 專頁
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> 即是畫不像原本的作品?

  Sort of what alice456 meant. No matter how you practise, there are some
features/lines you are unable to draw or somehow modify as you get used to
the character. These differences could be their eyes, clothes or even the
type of lines or color methods you used - this forms certain individual styles.

  Just remember: you won't be able to copy the exact styles.
(In fact you should try not to ELSE you'll get sued for violating copyrights)

  Up to certain times, when you feel so familiar with the target character, you'll
probably draw it in YOUR way - that turns out to be your styles.

  This is just many one of the ways to develop your individual styles - explore for
the right styles takes times, so be patient.

  Good luck, san4.
a.k.a -  Anthony O^O
如果看到我用英文留言, 請使用谷歌翻譯來翻譯。
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Comic: Bait in Dress | Game Sprites: Noah More Heroes, WitchBlaster

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